IELTS Writing 雅思寫作7分到9分的關鍵
IELTS 寫作Task1 约150字(其實不多);Task 2 约250字(也不算多),如何将writing 提升到最高分?
關鍵是給人有native english 的感覺。
先說說Task one (academic version)吧!150字,真的不多。
1. 圖表必須「互相」比較分析;
2. 用字遣詞要多變化,生動,如不要只用increase,
3. connective words 的起承轉合(在書店、網絡大把大把的,將適合你用的,挑30句左
到Task 2吧,一樣重視起承轉合的connective words 的應用,但這只是基本。要拿7-9分,最關鍵是Coherenc
什麼是Coherence and cohesion? 說白了,就是7+3視覺英語所提出的:「3個家族」
舉個例子吧!(例一)
The globalization is an interdependent planet. Many relationships are not limited to territorial boundaries. A country is affected by activities of other countries.
很簡單,3個簡單句字。就算文法全對,大約6-7分左右,
但是如果你能運用到形容語(第二家族)及修飾語(第三家族),
看看上面例句吧!relationship 一字,絕對可以在「形容語」上大造文章!想想國與國間的rela
再想一下,將3句合成一句行嗎?當然可以。你的7+3 功力就在這裡應用到了。將第二句的「形容組合」以where 開一個defining clause, 來形容planet 這名詞。還有,將第三句以and 連結(第三家族),並以「負負得正」的另一個方式表達:
The process of globalization is an unprecedented (前所未有)interdependent planet where economical, social, religion, political, cultural and military relationships are not limited to territorial boundaries and no countries or states or entities are not affected by outside its direct control. (39 words)
一句複合句都差不多40字,加些起起承轉合的connectiv
再舉多個例子吧!(例二)
You could possibly send me some brochures. Be sure that they contain the information on membership and associated fee. If the brochures are not available, please provide me the contact details of any such clubs. So, I can make my own enquiries.
這段英文如用在Oral是非常不錯的段落,邏輯清晰,容易明白。
怎樣衝8-9分呢? 關鍵都是: 主句+形容語+修飾語的「複合句」(就是IELTS評卷官講求的
If so, you could possibly send me some brochures containing the information on membership and associated fee, or at least provide me the contact details of any such clubs so that I can make my own independent enquiries. (38 words)
又是一句8-9分的句子。
怎樣提高自己寫作的「模仿能力」? 關鍵不是死記,而是懂將一些高分句了拆分成3個家族(主句+形容
所以,好好掌握7句型+3家族具体運用,多用7+3技術拆解+模
 
						

